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Monday, 2nd December 2002, 2:19pm
An opinion by: Rascal
 My Brilliant Career

My Brilliant Career by Miles Franklin

Trying to explain my hysterical opinion of this two-book edition is going to be tough. I started out unimpressed with the first book, My Brilliant Career. I didn't appreciate the instantaneous transformation experienced by heroine Sybilla Melvyn - from an ugly, too-intelligent farm girl into a ultra-talented, spirited beauty with the power to thrall every male who encounters her in her grandmother's gracious home.

But while reading the sequel, My Career Goes Bung, I began to get interested. Putting both books together does an excellent service to their author, I think. My Brilliant Career was written in 1898-99, when Miles Franklin was 18 years old. By 1901 it had met caught the public's attention in England, where it was first published, and at home in Australia. My Career Goes Bung was published as a sequel in 1946, after Franklin had established herself in literary and feminst circles in Australia and in Europe.

The groovy and sophisticated thing that the author does with the sequel is to write a kind of deconstructive reflection on the first story - a "what really happened" story. So we meet many of the same characters over the same time period, as well as new characters who believe themselves to be portrayed in the first book.

In this tale, Mother is not quite the mean old bitch described in the original. Instead heroine Sybilla draws strength from her parent's hard edged no-bullshit morality. Neither is Father a weak drunk, but rather a intellectually inclined man, ill-fit for the life of a farmer. In this version of events, Sybilla's fortunes look promising when her novel brings unexpected notoriety. Her family scrapes together a cheap fare to Sydney, so she may take advantage of an invitation, and hopefully further her career. In Sydney she learns first hand about all manner of concepts such as EXPERIENCE, SOCIETY, CONTACT, SUCCESS, INFLUENCE, LOVE and EVENING DRESS (author's caps). Her salty reactions are more developed in this sequel, as are Sybilla's views on women's permitted roles in Australian society at that time:

    "He flared into sentiments ignoble before an unsophisticated girl, so defenceless that he could say, 'I'm sorry I can't marry you' to her face without fear of being snubbed.

    He said women were a pack of cats, only this was a politer word than he used. I said nothing at all. When the first fury passed he said women had no call to talk about men, that a woman's whole aim in life was to chase some poor devil and to trap him into having to slave for her for ever after. I thought this cowardly inconsistency seeing that women were compelled to marry by nearly all other occupations being closed to them, and by the pressure of public opinion. Men want it both ways like a bully arranging a game."

In the end each book provides a shadow image of the other with the same theme emerging in both: from a background of dust and bush-drudgery through the promise of freedom and glamour... to an appreciation of her unique country, which must include a full complement of dust and drudgery. This double edition seems to be out of print in the USA.




Readers have left 7 comments

I thoroughly enjoyed reading the novel My Brilliant Career by Miles Franklin and am looking forward to reading the sequal.  I regard Miles Franklin as a quality author of the 20th century.  I am currently studying her novel for Grade 6 Trinity College London (TCL) Theory examinations and am using her for Question 3.  Thank you for publishing this website for students like me, who find this site immensley helpful.
Regards :)
Sarah Pugh on Monday, 4th March 2002, 5:42am
Thanks for this website. I am currently in year 11 at Lockyer District High School in QLD (Aus) and we are studying 'My Brilliant Career'. I have theory exams next week and i am very glad i found this site. i hope it helps!!! THANKS
P.S. it was a good book, hard to get into... but good! i was very disappointed at the ending though :-( it was so...
Ash on Sunday, 13th November 2005, 2:23am
im sorry but you spelt sybylla wrong, but we are not all perfect
paul on Wednesday, 16th November 2005, 12:48am
the novel 'My Brilliant Career' has been one of the poorest I have read. It consisted of a love story that could have ended happily with the mutual comfort of both parties involved secured, but for the folly of a foolish young girl who played with a man only to reject him to live a life of povery. If Franklin succeeds in one thing and one thing only it is that she was very talented at depressing one.
john smith on Monday, 29th May 2006, 6:10am
at first i found the novel 'My Brilliant Career' very hard to get into, but then it got really good! :D i was VERY dissapointed with the ending however, and i still dont understand why it ended the way it did........
laura on Wednesday, 26th July 2006, 6:52am
i am currenty studying the text for year nine literature. the book was hard to get into but i found it was quite good after that. the end, however, left me sorely dissappointed and i found it quite difficult to relae to Sybylla.
bailey on Tuesday, 24th April 2007, 10:02pm
I revisited My Brilliant Career after 15 years. I was still impressed by its relevance to my life here in the U.S.
I entered my 20s in the late 60s. Women could not get credit cards unless a man co-signed. We could not get mortgages, no matter our income. I was invited to top graduate schools, but many would not provide a scholarship,even though they were wooing me, because "women get married, pregnant, and leave." I applied for a lowly lab tech job and was asked what birth control I used. When I later went to Harvard, I learned there were no facilities for women interns in the hospitals.
The author wrestled with whether to give over her life to a husband or to have a life of her own. Maybe her flirting seemed unfair to the men, but certainly we women have seen plenty of that in reverse. I choose to believe she was testing out her possibilities, but maybe she was playing with them for some fun, or to get some positive feedback about her feminity.
What I find lasting about this story is that she dealt with hard issues that still confront women today. And the fascinating cultural background certainly adds appeal.
lynn on Saturday, 15th September 2007, 6:53pm

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